วันจันทร์ที่ 13 สิงหาคม พ.ศ. 2550

The First draft of writing assignment

Dear All,

Please post the groups' first drafts together with names of the members here by clicking comment button.

Kru Sai

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beauty5 กล่าวว่า...

Teenage
By...
Kittiya Raknui 501031414
Paychan Thansai 501031427 Ruthairat Kawaen 501031435 Sasithorn Phomjan 501031441 Suwiraya Thongpradit 501031445
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happy กล่าวว่า...

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by...ED ENG
Yada Nanuan 501031418
Bongkot Chansuk 501031424
Wanwisa Suwanno 501031439
Wilawan Vaewwanchit 501031440
Somprona Adam 501031442

@/*-+ (D)(J)(.) (C)(P)(B) +-*/@ กล่าวว่า...

*-* Teenager *-*

Whoever was born on this world must pass teenager. It’s stage between a childhood and adult. I think this stage have freedom for everything nobody complain I can do everything If I wanted. I can go to everywhere If I wanted .this stage It’s growing and changing as body made a teenager have several good things and bad things


Three good things being a teenager are Friend : who are understand me for everything. To help and give me for advice when I have problem, smile with me when I have a happy times ,ready laugh with me when I have funny, ready cry and encourage me when I feel sad and make me forget your worries. I think being a teenager friend is the most important.

Next,I have a cellular phone. It made me comfortable for communication I can contact with friend and everybody when I have busy or want to talk with him beyond I can send sms to someone ,listening to music and radio ,photograph ,record vdo and sound ,dictionary and etc.
A cellular phone make me happy and comfortable with living being a teenager


The last, I have being love. It’s first love for young between a girl and a boy to be lover. It difference from being a child :have love for my parents and cousins. Everyone called this love “puppy love” I feel so happy and very glad with this love. Although who think having love this stage will imbalanced and bad thing because It make to spend times in learn but I think If you know divide times It’s no problem.


Three bad things being a teenager are have a heavy responsibilities : study I have a lof of homework and more study hard until I haven’t leisure for myself so that unwind and I must to do chores for example laundry, iron, sweep the floor and etc. I can’t stand doing chore Although doing chore is exercise way but I think It’s very boring exercise and
I would like to avoid


Next, having menstruation : a girl when to enter teenager must have menstruation .It’s boring for me because before having menstruation have effect are bad mood and easy to get angry during have menstruation for someone have many symptoms for example have a stomachache, headache and to feel tried all over the body beyond It made me to lack confidence when doing different activity.


The last, Imitate friends : being a teenager is curious and to try everything especially from a friends. sometimes teenager Imitate in bad things for example smoke, drink alcohol, gamble , to participate in the night life and drug because teenager use majority times with friend It’s easy to Imitate


I think being a teenager is freedom for everything .to be curious, to try do new things around and It’s changing body. For that reason made a teenager have several good things bad things but I think It dependence myself choose to do anything.
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Koraya Saiwaree 501031413
Tipapan Srirod 501031420
Nansinee Tavisuwan 501031422
Haruthai Wachasad 501031446
Apipong Tongchareon 501031448

funny กล่าวว่า...

THE TEENAGER....
Many people think that teenager is a person who is studying secondary school, but in fact, teenager is a person who is between 13 and 19 years old. Naturally, most of teenager love to live freely and enjoy with they friends. However the characters of teenager are both positive and negative.

No one refuses that teenager is the age that have power to do many things they want. If they get the good instruction from adults, they always can have good chances to do somethings positive to them. Naturally, they are ambitious do fun activities to show their abilities. You can observe that while they are in school, they love to do activities with friends such as play sports,hold a debate, and so on. Furthermove, teenagers are curious of knowledge, especially the lesson they admire. They can do everything not discourage to know what they want. Last, teenagers always love to live with friends so they try to do everything to another admit them in to society.

Teenager is in the age changing fast in many way, especially body. So, they might be confused what they are, and what they should do if they don’t get a good suggestion from an adult, they might do something bad. You can see that many teenagers often speak rude with another.For example, when someone make them feel bad, they usually don’t care and speak rude to him are her. In addition, they always love to have fun activities that make them enjoyable not serious. So, they after avoid to do something that boring them even the order of perents. For example, they often be lazy to help their perents and they always love to live with friends.

From above, adults should understand the nature of teenagers and try to teach them to know what positive things they should do and what negative things they should avoid.

Kamonkwan Lannoi
501031412
Suhana Hama
501031417
Rochidah Sannakit
501031434
Wantanee Chedaud
501031438
Abibah Awae
501031450

freeesize กล่าวว่า...

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by...ED Eng